2012년 11월 29일 목요일

Take Home Essay - Should Students Wear School Uniforms?

Should Students Wear School Uniforms?
(I personally agree)


     Most private schools force students to wear school uniforms, because they give students sense of belonging to the school. However, School uniforms are useless and outdated tradition.
21st century is characterized by freedom and individuality. However, by making students wear unified clothes, schools ignore the individuality of students. Students not only express themselves through their words and behaviors but also by what they wear to school.
The typical groups that require their members to wear school uniform include military, and bureaucracy. All of which are cold, hierarchical, and authoritarian groups. Schools unintentionally create authoritarian atmosphere just by adopting school uniforms.
    Forcing students to wear school uniforms is more than just ruining of the fashion. Students shouldn’t be forced to wear what they don’t want to wear, and should have the right to wear what they want to. School uniform clearly restricts the freedom of students

University of Chicago Prompt


Essay Option 2.

Heisenberg claims that you cannot know both the position and momentum of an electron with total certainty. Choose two other concepts that cannot be known simultaneously and discuss the implications. (Do not consider yourself limited to the field of physics).
Inspired by Doran Bennett, BS'07 Chemistry and Mathematics.



      Heisenberg claims that the momentum and position of an electron can’t be known simultaneously. The more precise we know about momentum, the less certain we are about the position. I think my weaknesses and strengths are similar to the position and the momentum of an electron. The more I realize about my strengths the less I know about my weaknesses, and vice versa.
     Few people are aware of both their strengths and weaknesses. Knowing about strengths makes people feel satisfied with them and forget about their weaknesses. Like every men, I have many weaknesses as well as strengths. It is very hard for me to fix my weaknesses when I’m aware of my strengths because it makes me feel proud of myself. I feel like I can fix my weaknesses later on because they aren’t that significant. Knowledge about my strengths blurs out the awareness of my weaknesses. Sometimes this fact puts me into a trouble. When I take two tests in a row, getting a good score at the first test usually leads me to fail the next test because I forget that I am actually bad at certain subjects and prepare less for the test.
The bigger problem is that this sometimes hinders me from working harder to improve myself. I get fixed to a certain state. Every people have their own weaknesses, so one should try hard to overcome his or her weaknesses and improve. For instance, when I think that I’m good at science, I forget that my writing skills aren’t that good, and then I don’t try hard to improve my writing. Then, my writing skill is fixed to where I was. In order to break from that sate, I need external stimulation like getting bad grade in a writing class.
    Similar things happen in the opposite way. When I’m focused on my weakness, I lose confidence and get depressed, so I forget my strengths. For instance, after I fail at my French quiz, I my mind suffers with the fact that I’m terrible at French, and for a moment I forget that I am actually good at something else. After I realize my weakness and try to fix them, I can’t remind myself of my strengths because I’m too busy improving my weaknesses. My mind is stressed and desperate to solve the flaw. When I first got into middle school, I realized that I was not good at English as my classmate who had lived abroad for a long period of time. During that period, I wasn’t proud of myself because I was too busy improving my language skills.   
I think the ideal situation is while reminding myself that I have various strengths, never forget that I have many weaknesses and need to keep trying to improve myself. However, it is hard to find the equilibrium. Since it is hard to know both respects at the same time, I think it is important task for the rest of my life to find the spot where I can keep improving without being depressed or stressed. 

2012년 11월 22일 목요일

10 Flash Fictions


1. Finally I'm going to propose a girl I fell in love at first sight. As I approach her, I notice something shiny on her ring finger.

2. He woke up in the middle of the night, and was extremely thirsty. He picked what was next to him and drank. The next day he found an empty bottle of ink next to him.

3. A boy dived into the swimming pool. Strangely enough, the water tasted a bit salty.

4. He studied chapter 6 overnight for the quiz. 10 minutes before the exam, he entered the classroom and saw all the other kids studying chapter 7.

5. A soldier inside a trench was writing a letter. A week later, a bride to be receives an unfinished letter.

6. They were dating. The girl says “I should take this urgent phone call” and goes out. She returns with wet hands.

7. A boy was bullied by his classmates. Tomorrow, he will carry something other than his backpack to the school.  

8. Three exams in one day, and got 2 hours before the lights are out. 

9. He suspected other people for the lost pen. Suddenly, he notices that something is in his pocket.  

10. At the airport, he couldn’t find his passport.   

2012년 11월 18일 일요일

Is It Wrong to Use Animal for Human Benefit? – The Review of “Earthlings”




Our ancestors began eating meat as early as 1.5 million years ago. It is our instinctive, animal desire to prey upon other animals on earth. Humans have hunted and used other animals for clothing, and many other purposes. Since then, our perception about animal rights has improved a lot. However, the tradition of eating meat and using animals has barely changed. A documentary “Earthlings” addresses the issue of our ancient tradition of a mainly meat diet, along with other animal abuses. While some people acclaim this movie, many others oppose the ideas presented. Although I could agree with many arguments that this documentary made, the method used is not very satisfactory.
First, I want to point out the issue of adhering to the emotional appeal. Like many animal rights organizations and activists, this documentary tries to persuade people through emotional approaches, not with factual data and logical reasoning. This documentary barely uses logic, but only uses shock therapy through selected footages. The problem is that emotional approaches can be misleading. Actually, the question of whether eating meat is harmful or beneficial for human beings, animals, and the environment is very substantial and needs to be addressed prudently. Other than emotional aspects, there are many other aspects that we need to consider. Some people actually argue that eating a moderate amount of meat is healthy for the environment. For instance, animals kept on small farms also produce benefits such as fending off predators and pests and fertilizing soil. Also, meat diet can be healthier. Many scientists and doctors say that humans cannot live without consuming protein, and we need to eat meat which contains complete protein. Plant proteins are incomplete which means they do not contain all of the amino acids needed by the human body. Also, meat is highly efficient, which means that it cancels out the resources that were used to produce meat. The documentary failed to deal with these oppositions.
In my personal opinion, the act of using animals for purposes like getting meat or leather itself should not be blamed. Even animals eat and hunt other animals for food and other reasons like territories. Also, any people or documentary does not have the right to force people to become vegetarians or vegans. Just as we can’t force lions and cheetahs to become vegetarians because it is not right to kill another living creature, we can’t force people to stop eating meat because we think it is wrong.

The example of corporate ranching
However, humans are different from animals that we are way over the limit. Using the shocking imagery and video clips, Earthlings successfully conveys the message that humans have crossed the line. In this movie, human beings exhibit total disrespect towards the animals. Human beings raise thousands of animals in a cage without allowing them any free space, and treat them unethically in the process of raising. Although using animals for our good might be justified, these acts cannot be justified at all. I fully agree with the documentary on the point that corporate ranching and inhumane practices are terrible and should be put to an end immediately.
The essence of the points made in this movie is not that we should stop take advantage of animals at all, but pointing to the fact that we are lacking basic respect for the species on earth other than human. The movie calls this attitude as “speciesism” and asserts that our unconscious sense of superiority should stop, and people need to start respect all animal species. I definitely agree that “speciesism” needs to stop. The famous Russian writer Leo Tolstoy said that “As long as there are slaughterhouses, there will be battlefields.” Our unconscious superiority against animals translates into racism and disrespect for other human beings. Speciesism and Racism share the same root, which is disregarding another creature. If people stop treating animals as inferior beings and start to treat them with respect, problems like racism and war will also be improved.
     Nothing is good in an extreme level. It is too extreme to say that we should stop killing animals for any purposes. Not getting benefit from animals at all would be just at unnatural as exploiting animals. It would create many side effects. We should remind that issues like eating meat and using animal skins were not a big problem 1000 years ago. Now, it’s a huge problem. The difference is that we are exploiting animals now. Although our perception of animal rights has improved, humans still possess speciesism, which a belief that human beings are above other animal species. The documentary “Earthlings” shows humans treating other animal speices as inferior beings and ignoring their rights through real video footage. Although the documentary “Earthlings” clearly has a limit that it lacks a logical approach to the issue, it is a good documentary which raises our awareness of the issue.

Ben X Review


Ben X Review


Monologues used in the film

    Ben X is a refreshing movie made in Belgium. Overall, it is a very good and heavy movie. Unlike typical entertainment movies, this movie is intended to be controversial and thought provoking. From the beginning to the end, the movie strives to leave a message about various problems in our society. The movie incorporates dark mood which adds seriousness to the movie. Characteristically, the movie shows monologues of characters like an interview, so the audience feels like they’re watching a real documentary.
   The movie did a nice job in addressing various social issues. It deals with many issues such as autism, suicide, bullying at school, virtual reality, indifferent society, and family discord such as divorce. Dealing with many issues certainly has risks. The movie might lose its focus and deal with each issue superficially. However, the movie cleverly blends those issues into Ben’s life story and makes connection between the issues it’s dealing with. For instance, being bullied at school, which is his reality, leads Ben to be obsessed with his fake identity inside the computer game. Accordingly, bullying causes Ben to consider suicide as an escape from his harsh reality. This also shows that our society is indifferent to individuals because while he was making a whole book containing methods of suicide, nobody even cares about it.
      The twist at the ending was brilliant. Throughout the movie, the movie foreshadows that something terrible is going to happen. At the beginning, Ben’s mother says something like “somebody had to die. That’s when people realize things are wrong.” Viewers start to expect that somebody will die in the film. However, when the movie reaches the end, the movie overturns viewer’s expectation by showing that the death of Ben was actually fabricated. It was the family’s plan to help Ben from bullies. After that, when the audience begins to expect that all the conflicts have been resolved, the movie shows that the girl who Ben fell in love with was actually an illusion. The movie breaks the viewers’ expectations one more time.   
     Ben X shows why people get addicted to computer games. When we see game addicts, we blame the addict for their intemperance. We assume that there is a problem with that individual. However, most of the game addicts are people who seek escape from their harsh and seemingly inescapable reality. In pathological modern society, it is very hard to get consolation from reality. Ben X shows that society is to blame, not the individual.

Ben is bullied at his school because he is autistic
     Also, the movie reveals how selfishly and hypocritically we view and treat autistic people. Ben has suffered from bullying since he was very young, which made him obsessed with game and suicide. The doctors who treat Ben only try to explain and understand Ben in their standards and don’t care about Ben’s current situations and predicaments. Some doctors put Ben in stressful situation, and doctors don’t even realize that he has been bullied.  
      This movie is not perfect. There are some irrelevant scenes that blur the message, like the scene in which the car runs toward Ben’s mother. The editing was bit unnatural. However, the message the movie tried to convey is serious and the method it used was original and effective. 

2012년 11월 8일 목요일

Review of the first 1 hour of the movie Ben X


      


    So far, the movie  introduces the main character Ben, people and situations around him. Ben has autism and indulging in computer game. In reality, he is being excluded by his classmates and some school gang members bully him. His mother is closer to a observer rather than a protector. Ben's doctor talks a lot and tires to explain his behavior but never seem to treat him with appropriate respect and warmth. 



    Since he is not getting enough attention and love in a real life, Ben seeks them in a virtual reality. Before and after school, he plays online video game and meets a girl who seems to really care about him. Even when he is humiliated at school, he doesn't get a consolation from his family or his doctor, but gets it from his virtual friend in the video game. 

     So what's going to happen next? I suppose that since the reality is getting harsher and harsher for Ben, he will try to meet his virtual friend in his real life. Meeting with the girl would change Ben positively since he will finally get love and attention he needed to break out of his own world.